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eh just a interest check, who is interested in playing paintball?

the first photograph look like KELVIN!! 

noise actually makes your BNW photograph look better.   

dun worry man! the photograph is great. 

hello,
i see potential in your photograph 5 and 7.

Photograph 5 seems to be too tight.
a wide angle shot of the baby and the female subject will bring out the mood. 

photograph 7 give me a feeling of distance.
a closer shot will certain make it better.

overall your photograph is great.
shoot more man!!!

 
 

hello janice!
your photographs are great.
however you need to take note of your background when composing.
photograph 2 and 3 seems under exposed.

keep shooting eh 

 

well compose photograph.
The mood and the choice of median is good.

Keep it up man!

PS: Dun let me catch you drinking again 

POO next time pack me in your luggage eh !  i always want to go to the states. 

eh for photograph 2 & 3 you should shoot landscape which allow you to capture more of the street.
your architecture shots horizon also abit off also.

wah cyber bully seh ! 

toa payoh eh! 

holga rocks!   

interesting series. i would like to see them in prints. 

greetings!

The series is generally good however i like to pickup some photographs that have the potential for more.

Photograph 6,8 i feel that you should go closer, soak yourself in their joyous occasion thus pickup their moment of joy in a more vivd and expressive ways.

photograph 4 , 7 & 8 lack the main focus i feel.

cheers! shoot more eh! 

thankew! thankew! 

hello!
maybe you could tell us what your assignment about =)
i see potential in your photographs, but we need to know more to give a more relevant critic to your assignment. 

cheers~!